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Leo thee Lemon's avatar

Really cool.

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Edwin, this prologue is incredibly immersive. I love how you’ve woven the futuristic corporate world, lunar exploration, and human fragility together. The way you show small towns like Amarillo caught in the machinery of ambition makes the story feel both vast and deeply personal. I’m already intrigued to see how Daniela and Iker navigate this fragile, impossible world.

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